Thanks for sharing your post with me.
Writing from your pain is a great place to start. You’ve written here about what concerns you. One suggestion I would make is this: When you write, make it more conversational. How would you share this if you were having coffee or dinner with a friend?
When you write as you talk, people will be more inclined to read and engage.
Keep on writing. You’ll get better with every post. And since you’re willing to learn, there’s a wide open future ahead of you.